Really good job with your elevator pitch. I really like how you identified how the app will work and why it would be useful. I also like that you identified a target audience. I would maybe go into more specifics about your target market (budgets, age, etc.). I would also talk about how the app can generate profits to potential investors that way it might entice them a little more. Other than that, nice job!
Overall I think you did a good job with your elevator pitch. You communicated your business idea well, and I like how you had a second person as a part of the video. My feedback would be to put more content into your pitch. You only used 51 out of the available 90 seconds. You could use a creative hook to grab the attention of the person you are pitching to. You have a great idea that could easily fill a 90 second pitch with rich content. Again, you did a good job with your pitch and have a good idea.
Hi Jesse,
ReplyDeleteReally good job with your elevator pitch. I really like how you identified how the app will work and why it would be useful. I also like that you identified a target audience. I would maybe go into more specifics about your target market (budgets, age, etc.). I would also talk about how the app can generate profits to potential investors that way it might entice them a little more. Other than that, nice job!
Overall I think you did a good job with your elevator pitch. You communicated your business idea well, and I like how you had a second person as a part of the video. My feedback would be to put more content into your pitch. You only used 51 out of the available 90 seconds. You could use a creative hook to grab the attention of the person you are pitching to. You have a great idea that could easily fill a 90 second pitch with rich content. Again, you did a good job with your pitch and have a good idea.
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