I feel that your product could be a good thing to have on the market. Another aspect that I love is that you did well was letting the customer know you live by your healthy lifestyle. Some things that you can change about the pitch or add is making the customer feel that your product necessarily. Some simple things that you can change is instead of saying "my goal" you should say directly what this product is going to do, and that gives the impression that this product is needed.
Hi Jesse, Great job with your elevator pitch! I think you spoke very well and confidently. You really explained your product well and you gave a very clear understanding on how the product will be useful and beneficial. A couple things I would add are explain how it will generate profit for investors and what makes the product better than any other alternative. Otherwise, great job!
I feel that your product could be a good thing to have on the market. Another aspect that I love is that you did well was letting the customer know you live by your healthy lifestyle. Some things that you can change about the pitch or add is making the customer feel that your product necessarily. Some simple things that you can change is instead of saying "my goal" you should say directly what this product is going to do, and that gives the impression that this product is needed.
ReplyDeleteHi Jesse,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your elevator pitch! I think you spoke very well and confidently. You really explained your product well and you gave a very clear understanding on how the product will be useful and beneficial. A couple things I would add are explain how it will generate profit for investors and what makes the product better than any other alternative. Otherwise, great job!